
Paramecia in a drop of pond,
Specks milling on the wreckage of dead stars,
Motes adrift in several gods’ eyes,
We precede our much foretold demise.
Unapprised of what there’s to confront,
We go on going on until we don’t,
You and I, he, she, it, we and they.
The noun names us. The verb takes us away.
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Your poem reduces the vast, overwhelming mystery of human existence down to a single, elegant grammatical metaphor.How tiny we are in the universe?
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You bring a sensitive, insightful eye to my little verse. Thank you for that. A text benefits tremendously from a good reader!
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Yes, I agree completely with Josie. Your poem is succinct and says it all – beautifully!
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Thanks so much, Sue!
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