Quickness, Sureness, Deep Intelligence

Nothing we do has the quickness, the sureness, the deep intelligence living at peace would have.


(Denise Levertov)

I had the unique experience of being exposed to a poem orally, recited by the poet no less, and of understanding her words enough to be moved by them. Denise Levertov’s poem is called “Life at War.” It was new at this reading. She recites it from her handwritten notebook here, in 1966, starting at minute 11:35 of the video. Her tone and inflection of voice are earnestly neutral, which allows the words to stun, the delivery not distract. Her enunciation has bell-like clarity; her phrasing is deliberate, scrupulous, unforced. The periods breathe and cohere unhesitantly. For my ear and taste, Levertov’s recitation is majorly how it’s done. Respect to a master. 

I’ve transcribed what I heard on the fly. There may be an error in what’s typed here, and obviously it’s not her lineation. It will be in published form somewhere. What’s a poem for? To rusticate on a page or to fly into someone’s ear? This one flew into mine. It came at me straight and hard; I had to get it down and pass it on.

LIFE AT WAR
by Denise Levertov
(transcribed from recitation)

The disaster’s numb within us, caught in the chest, roiling in the brain like pebbles.
The feeling resembles lumps of raw dough weighing down a child’s stomach on baking day.
Or Rilke said it: My heart, could I say it overflows with business?
But no, as though its contents were simply balled into formless lumps. Thus do I carry it about.

The same war continues. We have breathed the grit of it in, all our lives.
Our lungs are pocked with it, the mucus membrane of our dreams coated with it,
the imagination filmed over with the gray filth of it.

The knowledge that humankind — delicate men whose flesh responds to a caress,
whose eyes are flowers that perceive the stars, whose music excels the music of birds,
whose laughter matches the laughter of dogs,
whose understanding manifests designs fairer than the spider’s most intricate web —
still turns without surprise, with mere regret, to the scheduled breaking open
of breasts whose milk runs out over the entrails of still-alive babies,
transformation of witnessing eyes to pulp fragments, implosion of skinned penises into carcass gullies.

We are the humans! Men who can make, beings so lovely
we have believed one another the mirror image of a God we felt as good,
who do these acts, convince ourselves it is necessary.
These acts are done to our own flesh. Burned human flesh is smelling in Vietnam as I write.

Yes, this is the knowledge that jostles the space in our bodies
along with all we go on knowing of joy, of love.
Our nerve filaments twitch with its presence day and night.
Nothing we say has not the husky phlegm of it in the saying.
Nothing we do has the quickness, the sureness, the deep intelligence living at peace would have.

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He Wants to Get Run Over by a Song

“We keep moving. We keep putting one foot in front of the other and wanting to be here. It takes a lot for somebody to decide they don’t want to be here… The world’s kind of painful — but God, I can’t get enough of it. I just don’t want it to end.”


(Jeff Tweedy)

Me neither. Jeff Tweedy heads up the band Wilco.

He devoted a second book, “How to Write One Song” (2020), to encouraging across-the-board creativity and to offering practical suggestions to aspiring songwriters. One is simply to devote at least 20 minutes every day to working on songs, good or bad. “If you tried to write a bad song every day, you’d end up writing a good song every once in a while, you know?” he said. “I just think it’s about putting yourself in the position of being in the way of a song.”

Remembrance of Virginia Giuffre.
“It takes a lot for somebody to decide they don’t want to be here.” Virginia Roberts Giuffre killed herself in April at age 41. Her posthumously published book has just appeared, titled Nobody’s Girl: Memoir of Surviving Abuse and Fighting for Justice, published by Doubleday.

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What’s Rebarbative and Nugatory and Quacks Like a Duck?


Cartoon by Gary Larson published here on 10-20-25.

Ice Breaker
Knock knock.
Who’s there?
Rebarbative and Nugatory.
Rebarbative and Nugatory who?
I know you are, but what about me?

Quiz: Which is which?
(A) Causing annoyance, irritation or aversion; repellent
(B) Trifling, inconsequential, having no force, inoperative

Follow the Instructions:
(A) __________
(B) ___________

Assessment
How’d you do? Fifty percent is passing.
__ %

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‘What Is an Image?’


“Tisch” (1962) introduces Gerhard Richter’s trademark blur and use of found photographic imagery. [New York Times caption and illustration]

The only constants in his oeuvre, which takes in every traditional genre… are change, relentless curiosity and, perhaps most of all, an insistent question: What is an image?


(Emily LaBarge)

[Gerhard Richter’s] painting “Tisch” (1962), has the daunting catalog position of painting No. 1. It introduces the trademark blur and use of found photographic imagery for which Richter is now well-known. Based on an image sourced from a 1950s edition of Domus, an Italian design magazine…

The scene is, however, obscured: A roiling mass of sweeping, agitated strokes hovers over the center of the image like a cataract, or an accident, or an exasperated defacement, or all of the above.

A wall text tells us that the artist originally painted the table as it was, directly from the source image; dissatisfied, he smeared the magazine photograph with solvents and then reproduced the result, in which the table has all but disappeared.

Richter remains one of the greatest living artists because of his devotion to the complexity of images, to always asking what we are looking at and how we might remake it, again and again.


“Stroke (on Red)” (1980). [New York Times caption and illustration]

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Eric Fischl and Other Eye Catchers


“Island of the Cyclops: The Early Years” (2018) by Eric Fischl. Credit… Eric Fischl. [New York Times caption and illustration]

[Eric Fischl] “Eric Fischl: Stories Told”
Featured here are about 40 large-scale works by the figurative painter Eric Fischl, created from the late 1970s to today. The artist largely had to teach himself traditional painting styles, studying early modern artists like Édouard Manet and Edgar Degas, because new art forms ruled during the ’70s and classic movements were out of fashion…


“Barbeque” (1982) by Eric Fischl is part of the exhibition “Eric Fischl: Stories Told” at the Phoenix Art Museum. Credit… Eric Fischl. [New York Times caption and illustration]

[Monica Thompson] “Threads”
A selection of collages, assemblages, textiles, eco-prints and weavings created by nine Montana women who are artists, mothers and art teachers is presented here…


“The Greater the Whole” (2023) by Monica Thompson. Credit… Monica Thompson, via Yellowstone Art Museum. [New York Times caption and illustration]

[Uman] “Uman: After all the things …”
The artist Uman was born in Somalia and raised in Kenya. She spent her teenage years in Denmark and then ultimately landed in upstate New York… Her paintings, created with markings like spirals, doodles, circles and stars, evoke the fabrics worn by women in Somali bazaars, the slanted flourishes of Arabic calligraphy and the countryside of Kenya and upstate New York…


“Sumac Tree in Roseboom” (2022-23) by Uman. Credit… Lance Brewer[New York Times caption and illustration]

“Eedo Kafia’s Turkana” (2024) by Uman. Credit… Lance Brewer. [New York Times caption and illustration]

All excerpts and illustrations are from Morgan Malget, “A Full Season of Art to See at Museums and Galleries Across the U.S.,” New York Times, 10-11-25.

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Right On! New Directions in Doggerel

With its loping equine cadence, amphibrachic tetrameter holds morbid fascination for the doggerel-besotted. No one knows what it is until they hear it. Then they go, “Oh yeah. There once was a girl from Nantucket.” But they’re wrong, that’s only trimeter. Keep up, people, we need four triplets.

Is there such a thing as front-rhyme? you ask. Should there be? What would it look like?

He grabs by the vitals whomever he chooses.
The slabs of endeavor are redolent ruses.

There you have it: an AB front-rhymed couplet. To your untested ear is rhyme even present? Not so much, right? That’s the genius. English has long since said eff it to Nantucket. But what’s to fill the empty bucket? Say hello to head rhyme.

I grant you, the couplet is flawed. The incidental rhyming at end-of-line — chooses/ruses — is unfortunate. It has no place in the model of a new paradigm. English, like Italian, is almost impossible to versify without rhyming. Let’s try to improve the couplet…

… first, by altering line 1:

He grabs by the vitals whomever he wishes.
The slabs of endeavor are redolent ruses.

Wishes and ruses are still too close to rhyming. Let’s try altering line 2:

He grabs by the vitals whomever he chooses.
The slabs of endeavor are redolent mimsies.

Close enough. Do not fret over the poetic license of line 2. A “slab of endeavor” explains itself in a manner of speaking. Mimsies, plural of mimsy, may be a recherché nonce word or not. Verse allows such ambiguities. Only poetry takes them seriously.

Embrace new vistas in versifying, messieurs-dames. Where there’s a will there’s a way. Dream hard, dream big, dream on. It’s the right thing to do.

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A Poem Is a Sketch

Disconcert. Defamiliarize. Distort. Disrupt. Draw, Stardust!

A friend I’ll nickname Stardust, avid prose reader, has remarked that relatively few people have a taste for poetry nowadays. I surmise it’s always been so, even in this or that era when <name-your-Great-Poet> flourished. The Great One would have been lionized by a coterie of fans in a populous land of nonreaders. 

Poets are a few obsessives bent on strewing words just so, in a way the next person can’t, applecart-tipping and necessary. Their readers are a peculiar lot bent on stewing over those words. I like to think of doggerel, tangentially, as poetry’s running dog. Hail to thee, blithe mutt! Bird thou never wert.

The pivot point in this spiel is that Stardust is a skilled artist who can reify in line, value and hue what a poet does in words:

I did not want / the moment to end / then stopped wanting / so I could / be, not yearn,…
(Lia Purpura, from “Intersection”, Poetry, September 2025)

“Did not want… then stopped wanting… be, not yearn,” Impossible to say differently that’s better. Both Stardust and Lia Purpura can turn a flash of perception into a thing that lingers, and completes itself in the psyche of another human.

If Stardust is ever pierced by a poem-moment, and there’s no special need for that to happen from where I stand, there’s hundred’s of feet of fertile loam accrued in my friend’s delta of sensibility for it to root in. Stardust will have perceived the poem as lines, akin to a sketch that works unusually well.

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Inwardness, Tenderness, Political Rage

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“I hate being called poet/dramatist/translator/director. Poet covers it all for me… I want to do justice to my inwardness, my tenderness, my political rage.”
 
(Tony Harrison)
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… como una mosca espía…

… like a fly on the wall… [“a spy fly”!]
(From “Revuelo” by Azurea20)
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… Maybe instead of building
a ship somewhere in your body
you just let yourself feel the pain and
humiliation. No need to make it beautiful
for some future reader. Just say how much
you wanted to hurt someone like you got hurt.
And then just watch that for a while. It’s okay
to feel horribly ashamed. Best not to look away.
(From “Karma Affirmation Cistern Don’t Be Afraid Keep Going Toward the Horror,” by Gabrielle Calvocoressi, Poetry, October 2025)
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A month and continent away
your father (a painter)
steps to my side

as we admire a row
of lavender & someone

en plein aire complains
the scene is mis-composed

(a power-line cuts through…)

your father smiles,
and gestures out — art

isn’t for capturing
what’s there

(From “Arles, Whidbey,” by Reed Turchi, Poetry, October 2025)
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‘Tirdy-Tree and One-Tird % of the Land Is Trilled, the Other Two-Tirds Not So Much’

My title is a headline from the Bulletin of the Apico-Dental Voiceless Fricative Foundation.

“Many tink current trends are a trowback to the Tirties.”


(Dr. Thurgood Thackery, A-DVFF President)

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Orison for Rubble

Depending on whether I’m going or returning, not long before or after my crossings of the mighty, tea-dark Brazos near the Arredondo bridge, I pass what appears to be a Christian church whose name has kerygma in it. 

For a period measurable in years now, I’ve meant to look up what kerygma means. As I spin by on the farm-to-market road, I always reflect that it has a Greek sound to it. This sets off a well-worn rut of reflection induced by the boredom of a familiar route… 

The old saw about something incomprehensible: “It’s Greek to me.” My southern grandfather’s time-stamped joke about one Black schoolboy’s query to another concerning homework: “Is ya didja Greek?” The only son he was that never graduated high school because he wouldn’t pass Latin, according to his mother. The father he was to my teenage mother, jibing her for dating a “jewboy,” son of the Tobolowskys, who owned the dry goods store.

At long last I’ve Googled kerygma, and its meaning is what you’d expect: a bunch of words in English. Something about preaching.

I always end up on ekphrastic, another Hellenism that writhes in and out of my retentive faculty like a slippery fish. It reminds me of a favorite painting of mine from among those I’ve done. 

The painting is narrow and tall. A female figure — girl/woman — stands holding a stunned five-year-old boy — son/brother. They fill the picture space from head to toe.

With the boy balanced on her scrawny hip, she stares skyward with the bleakest of looks, searching for God, maybe, or else the next bomb. Their skin is ashen; the coloring of their clothing filthy, ferrous, feral: mauve, olive, rust, ochre. 

Much as they are the putative subject, the true subject is the rubble of which they are the human pieces. Sturm und Drang; wrack and dreck; profit and loss.

I’ve never painted anything with more devotion than the abstract wreckage, technically a background, which envelopes the walking destined-to-be-killed. It’s an inglorious, ghastly gallimaufry of improvised shapes in gamuts of grisly grays.

Rubble — inky, icky, inevitable — enduring creation of man, background of so-called civilization.

Detail, “Rubble,” oil on watercolor paper, 14×30 in. (JMN 2024)

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